Since I would do the final presentation tomorrow, I consulted the professor today. The professor was nice and patient to me. Being a foreign student who had little knowledge of art history, this field was really unfamiliar to me. I tried extremely hard for everyday readings and the final project. My idea changed a lot since the beginning. The professor was telling me in detail what was inappropriate and what was missing. I improved a lot and understood more about what art was and what the final project should look like. In the end, I decided to be the agency to introduce, publicize and promote “Cinemagraphs”, and to contact, communicate, negotiate and settle deals between artists and target clients so as to apply and maximize the advantages and benefits of this new type of art and bring economic value and more profits to clients. The professor emphasized that I should describe more about the technique and exactly what “cinemagraph” was. Currently it was a bit confusing.
The comments were really helpful. I would be an all-nighter tonight to work on my presentation tomorrow. In addition, the professor said that the writing in my previous blogs was not good. I had some problems with grammar and expression. I felt so sorry that I am not a good writer. However, I kept on reading “On Writing Well”, and would go back and rewrite some entries. Knowing that a good writer cannot be achieved overnight, I would be continuously practicing writing blogs after this class was over.
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