Wednesday

Finally done with my presentation, slept for the whole afternoon!

The two professors and my classmates gave me a lot of valuable feedbacks for my final project. There were still some grey areas I needed to work on. For example, with the fact that GIF technique already exists, I should pay more attention to the two artists, not the cinemagraph. The two artists created this new art, but as time moves, other experts might also be able to create them. However, most of them cannot do as great as the collaboration of my artists. I should be the agency or the representative of these two artists, like the speak person for the famous movie actors to promote their work to target clients and to show their special talent and uniqueness. The second part was that instead of showing a lot of pictures, I should focus more on how my business would operate, such as how to reach clients, how to promote my artists’ work, which means more about my entrepreneurship instead of the art work itself. Thirdly, some of my classmates still did not know how the moving pictures came out. I should include a more detailed description of this technique, for instance, what GIF was, how the two artists took photos and edit. The last one was that I mainly asked clients near my area or my favorite places at NYC. I should ask more and do more research in order to show that how many target clients would respond to my business.

These were just the most important areas I needed to work on, certainly there were more which I would try my best to solve them in the final business plan.

Thank you so much for everyone’s precious feedback today!